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Offline plbb

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practice
« on: November 22, 2017, 10:40:35 pm »
Hope you like it~

Offline kiarash.tamizkar

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Re: practice
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2017, 12:44:56 am »
good job but i think for the left shot it was better to change focal distance cuz all the model is blurry and its not normal

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Re: practice
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2017, 07:16:25 am »
Hey, this looks like a pretty good model ! I think you can show it better to appreciate the hard work you've put into this. You can make some closeups or show just one bike. As it has been said, the DoF isn't helping here. I'd remove it, or at least decrease it. Cheers !

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Re: practice
« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2017, 05:03:34 pm »
good job but i think for the left shot it was better to change focal distance cuz all the model is blurry and its not normal
Thanks for your suggestion I will try it~

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Re: practice
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2017, 05:07:00 pm »
Hey, this looks like a pretty good model ! I think you can show it better to appreciate the hard work you've put into this. You can make some closeups or show just one bike. As it has been said, the DoF isn't helping here. I'd remove it, or at least decrease it. Cheers !
Thanks I bulid this model for few days,I had some render for single scooter,but it looks too normal,Thanks again~