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Offline Mohammed MOUYH

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living room .. interior design
« on: October 23, 2017, 07:01:27 pm »
your opinion ??

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Offline rfollett

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2017, 03:21:01 am »
always very cool - love it.

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2017, 06:50:46 am »
thank you bro

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2017, 04:09:35 am »
I like this one much more then the living room! Nice work

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #4 on: October 25, 2017, 07:13:44 pm »
i agree with you bro
thanks

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2017, 12:50:14 am »
It's a nice rendering, but I think your next step would be to create a focal point. Right now, my eye doesn't know what to look at. Maybe use light or depth of field to create a focal point? Consider composition too. From a materials and rendering standpoint, you're looking good.

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2017, 05:41:12 am »
okay bro
I will work on your advice

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #8 on: October 31, 2017, 07:48:12 am »
The more saturated colors look great, but I still think it's missing that focal point. If you're just wanted a room shot, I would fade the backplate, so your eye isn't drawn as strongly to that and use a wider lens so the furniture isn't cut off so uncomfortably. I do like the lighting on the wall sections - you could contrast that with some warmer light overhead.

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #9 on: October 31, 2017, 11:59:17 am »
agreed on the lighting. Looks a bit like a dentists office waiting room right now. some darker lighting, let that awesome blue glow from behind the walls shine through more.  OTherwise the layout is good, and I like the color pallet, i prefer darker floors, but that's just me :)

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #10 on: October 31, 2017, 06:22:51 pm »
thank you guys
 
I will work on your advice

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2017, 06:02:34 am »
Looking great! I LOVE the reflections off the table, and that cool texture. The progress is really neat to see!

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #13 on: November 06, 2017, 10:17:19 am »
Looking great! I LOVE the reflections off the table, and that cool texture. The progress is really neat to see!

thank you bro

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Re: living room + kishen interior design
« Reply #14 on: November 09, 2017, 06:48:21 am »
I do not see any visuals of the kishen interior that you are talking about...obviously new to this forum.  How can I view?